Friday, 12 November 2010

educational system now and in past ( first draft )

           
             The educational system is a miror that reflects the culture . The educational system of one country isnot the same in another country ,not only it changes from one country to another it also changes in the one country during different periods of time .
         Education in a short period of time was very different from education now.Perhaps we didnot study this vast amount of information that are studying now , but what we have studied remained firmly entrenched in our minds and time didnot erase it . In the past the teacher was very respected by students and their families . The threat of a parent that he would tell the teacher that his son did something wrong ,it was the greatest punishment for the student . I recall when we tell our parent that the teacher hit us , the parent punish us for the abuse to the teacher.I remembered when the teasher asks us to do a research , we go to the library ( that no longer has mentioned now) ,how we continue to look for information in books and references and how we benefit from the preparation of the research .
         The student now and despite the development of curriculum and updated in line with the requirements of the time , become like a box filled with information and discharged on the answer paper of the exam , then it becomes completely empty . Also the spirit of competition among students losts from our schools . The intellectual student (who interact with the community ,politically and socially ) disappeared .
        And not the defect in the educational system is caused by differing qualities of students only , but also inthe teacher . There is a deference between teacher now and in the past . While providing the latest training programs in modern teaching methods and improving their professional and well preparing in colleges of education , the teacher has lost a large part of his prestige and respect .
       Now the relationship between teacher and student is very different from the past . The parent now goes to school to support his son and the teacher is forced to apologize to the student , where the prestige of the teacher is missed .
Is it missed by the routine and the administrative system ? or missed when the teacher himself was running behind a living out of breath behind private lessons , turning the profession from the holy message of the prophets to a way to earn a living , even at the expense of his dignity .
      If we dealt with it on the other hand away from the student and the teacher , we find that despite the great technological development in recent years and increasing opportunites for student access to information through the means of various technology such as computers and the internet , we benefit much more than students now . The teacher assigned students to do a research in any subject , the student immediately go to the nearest computer and prints the search from the net without reading
 it .
       Finally we must dewal with the points of weakness in our educational system , encouraging creativity .We must think of developing curriculum and teaching methods aiming at comprehension .

5 comments:

  1. hi smsm your essay is very good,it has introduction ,body and conclusion, it has specific purpose and clear main idea

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  2. Good work SmSm .Your introduction is attractive.Your words are simple and expressive.

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  3. good essay SMSM your words and sentences are clear and simple ,your main idea is specific and your grammar is correct

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  4. very good essay SMSM,your introduction is very attractive .your words are very simple and your main idea is clear.

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  5. very good Asmaa
    write the final draft

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