Saturday, 23 October 2010

youth immigration ( first draft )

              Youth immigration is one of the important cases that needs to be discussed as it is an argumentative matter . As one of the Egyptian youth i am against our youth aimless immigration as it destroys our future . 
   

      If we talk about the causes that push youth to migrate , we must notice that poverty , unemployment and lack of employment opportunities are the main causes of youth immigration . In fact most university graduates find it is very difficult to find a job nowadays .They complete their long studies in order to start a long journey in searching for a job and for a better life . They only find despair which leads them to think of immigration .

            But not all our youth immigrants put these causes in consideration while thinking of immigration . As they only think of the benefits of immigration . They may go abroad for the purpose of education . Also they can do post graduate studies there . By traveling one can know a lot about customs, traditions of other countries . One can get in touch with people of other cultures , see different systems of life . Many of youth turns to traveling abroad to achieve themselves either by work or by study . 

          Although traveling abroad and immigration has many merits ,it has also some demerits . A large number of youth who migrate to a foreign countries face a great  failure as those travel without planning or thinking of What will they do there ?,Where will they stay ? and Which job will they have? They think that when they reach this country they will find everything they wants is possible and easy to catch . They think that they will achieve their dream of wealth and high estate , but the fact that they face hard troubles  because they rarely find a job and even if they find a job , it is always humiliated one which they can stand it as no one knows them there .
        
          Immigration also has two types , first there is a legal immigration and second there is an illegal immigration .We all know the legal immigration , but the illegal immigration is difficult to be determined according to its nature . The illegal migrants have a different kinds as follows :
- Individuals who step in illegally without setting right their legal situation .
- Individuals who step in legally but they extend after the end of the allowed period .
- Individuals who work illegally during allowed accommodation. 

          For example , the view of invalid boats which are  accumulated for migrants became a repeated scene as youth take some of these boats to Libya and then to Europe . So the numbers of drowned Egyptians in the Mediterranean Sea increasing , during sneaking into Europe union countries . According to that the migrants youth are the victims in any case. 

           There is an opinion which sees that immigration provide youth with the opportunity to success as whatever they want is possible . The immigrant youth gain more from the cultures, thoughts and technology of the society they migrate to. They see the bright side of immigration .
There is another opinion which is against immigration at all , they ask youth to wait for  government posts or to find any job but in the homeland.

          To sum up , in my opinion immigration  is not bad  itself, but we must know what we will do abroad and be sure of our future there . If they will not be sure of that , they should stay in their homeland . They should not wait for the government posts ,but they should learn different professions to help them earn their living .To have your own business  that has become a must that can not be ignored. these businesses may be a small factory , a small plot of cultivable land ,or a shop ....
But it is not a laughing matter as it needs patience ,          sleepless nights , perseverance and hard work.                 

Wednesday, 20 October 2010

youth immigration ( outline )

    outline

   -introduction:
-arguments about immigration
-my opinion about immigration
   
  -the first paragraph
-the causes of youth immigration
    
 -the second paragraph
-the benefits of immigration
    
- the third paragraph
- the disadvantages of immigration     

- the fourth paragraph
- the legal and illegal immigration
   
  -the fifth paragraph
- examples 
 -the counter opinion
   
  - conclusion

Wednesday, 13 October 2010

pollution

         Although we suffer from many problems , pollution is the most dangerous one we face today .
It has too types as ; water pollution , air pollution , noise pollution and so on . But the one which is more common in our society as an industrial country is air pollution . 
         There are many causes of air pollution , first demolishing of trees and forests  and turning agricultural areas into cities which causes lack of the amount of oxygen and increasing of air pollution with CO2 . Second , smoke of cars and factories which makes air full of killer poisons . 
           The air pollution has a terrible effects on the people as it causes many dangerous diseases such as cancer , lung diseases and heart diseases . It also effects on the growing crops and plants as it has its bad effect on the tempreature .
             In order to solve this problem , factories should be built outside cities to stop pollution . Trees should be planted every where to purify the atmosphere . Cars should be checked regularly . The government should build new cities in the desert to relieve the pressure of the crowded cities and to keep the agricultural areas without turning it into habitable areas . 
             To sum up , environment is a creation of Allah and we  must do our best to keep it pure and clean .

Wednesday, 6 October 2010

POLLUTION DRAFT

       -Although we suffer from many problems , pollution is the most dangerous one we face today .
It has too types as ; water pollution , air pollution , noise pollution and so on . But the one which is more common in our society as an industrial country is air pollution .
         -There are many causes of air pollution , first demolishing of trees and forests  and turning agricultural areas into cities which causes lack of the amount of oxygen and increasing of air pollution with CO2 . Second , smoke of cars and factories which makes air full of killer poisons .
           - The air pollution has a terrible effects on the people as it causes many dangerous diseases such as cancer , lung diseases and heart diseases . It also effects on the growing crops and plants as it has its bad effect on the tempreature .
             - In order to solve this problem , factories should be built outside cities to stop pollution . Trees should be planted every where to purify the atmosphere . Cars should be checked regularly . The government should build new cities in the desert to relieve the pressure of the crowded cities and to keep the agricultural areas without turning it into habitable areas . 
              - To sum up , environment is a creation of Allah and we  must do our best to keep it pure and clean .

pollution outline

-Causes of air pollution
-Demolishing trees
-Lack of oxygen
-Smoke of cars and factories
-Effects of air pollution
-Effects on human and plants
-Effects on tempreature
 -Solutions for the problem
-Moving factories outside
- Building new cities
-Increasing green areas