Although we suffer from many problems , pollution is the most dangerous one we face today .
It has too types as : water pollution , air pollution , noise pollution and so on . But the one which is more common in our society as an industrial country is air pollution .
Hi ASMAA ;
ReplyDeleteur essay is simple &has aclear introduction ,body& definite conclusion
BUT u have some mistakes:
1-ur intoduction is very short.
2-u need to write more information.
3-u have problems in verb agreement(it has too types as.......)(it have many types)
(has a terrible effects)(have terrible effects)
4-(so on)should be(etc,)
5-(which causes lack of the amount of oxygen)u should write more details)
6-(smoke...cars,killer poisons)wrong word choice
7-(demolishing...)(deforestration)
8-(but the one which is more common)literal meaning
9- (first,)wrong puncituation
10-u should write more to improve ur style
good luck