Although we suffer from many problems , pollution is the most dangerous one we face today .
It has too types as ; water pollution , air pollution , noise pollution and so on . But the one which is more common in our society as an industrial country is air pollution .
There are many causes of air pollution , first demolishing of trees and forests and turning agricultural areas into cities which causes lack of the amount of oxygen and increasing of air pollution with CO2 . Second , smoke of cars and factories which makes air full of killer poisons .
The air pollution has a terrible effects on the people as it causes many dangerous diseases such as cancer , lung diseases and heart diseases . It also effects on the growing crops and plants as it has its bad effect on the tempreature .
In order to solve this problem , factories should be built outside cities to stop pollution . Trees should be planted every where to purify the atmosphere . Cars should be checked regularly . The government should build new cities in the desert to relieve the pressure of the crowded cities and to keep the agricultural areas without turning it into habitable areas .
To sum up , environment is a creation of Allah and we must do our best to keep it pure and clean .
*your sentences are varied in length and structure *you hav to give more information in the second cause of air air pollution "smoke of cars'. *your words are simple and clear . *your essay have one consistent tone which is 'how dangeros is air pollution" .
ReplyDelete* you spoke about pollution in general and your introduction is on kinds of pollution not air pollution .
* you started each paragraph with topic sentence , but they are too simple .